Shawn
Jennings
9/19/14
Professor
Young
English 1100
Favorite
Place
I walk into
my house and the first thing I notice is the smell that engulfs my
nostrils. It’s not an awful smell by any
means. It’s a fresh smell, like the
smell of freshly picked fruit. Every day
I come home and take one step into my house I smell this scent. It almost puts me in a trance and it sort of
calms me down after a long day.
After taking in the smell I take off
my book bag and set it down on the oak colored hard wood floor. I then take off my shoes and place them on
the tan wool rug where the rest of families shoes are scattered. After this I make my way over to my cream
colored couch which is made of the softest leather. I lay down and it is like I am floating on a
cloud. I reach for the remote and turn
on the television.
The TV lets out a huge booming sound
that almost makes my ears bleed. I start
to cover my ears and wonder why the television was set to sixty out of one
hundred. I realize my Dad had come home
for lunch and turned the TV volume so high it could be heard four houses
down. After turning the volume down to a
soft twenty-five I watch a quick fifteen minutes of television before
dinner.
When my Mom yells, “dinner is ready!”
I find it hard to get off the couch. It’s
almost like I am sinking deeper and deeper into the cloud that is my
couch. My Mother yells again, “dinner is
ready, Shawn!” but I just can’t find the energy to escape the softest couch in
the world. Eventually, my hunger gets the
best of me because I begin to smell the freshness of my Mom’s potato leek
soup. I spring off the couch and sprint
to my chair. I grab my smooth silver
spoon and start to heave spoonful after spoonful into my gaping mouth. After my second spoonful I feel a burning
sensation on my tongue and around my whole mouth. I spit out the delicious potato leek soup
almost three feet across the table.
Luckily, my brother, Karl, was not sitting
across from me just yet. I apologize to
my Mom and clean up our brown wooden table.
Now I sit back down in my chair and remember to blow on the soup before
shoving it down my throat. Every
spoonful is like filling my mouth with joy.
It’s not too thick and it is not too watery. The soup fills every part of my mouth
perfectly and the taste is so pleasant.
Every slurp is sensational.
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